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No.4   投稿者:影法師   投稿日:2009-05-16 18:56   ID:jXc5rbXB5DE
ふむ、ACとのクロスですか…。なかなか楽しみな小説ですね。

個人的には割りと面白かったのですが、気になった点が一つ。AF=アームドフォースではなく、アームズフォートですね。正式名称は。

こういう基本的に変わらない名称等には気をつけたほうがいいと思いますよ。間違っていると、少々気になりがちですから。

No.3   投稿者:res   投稿日:2009-05-13 20:12   ID:WEEXlj7mtNw
ゼロの使い魔とACのクロスをつい夢想していた自分は惹かれました。
アンリエッタがメインという珍しさにもですが

アンサラーと戦っていたり、WGを受け継いでいる事からラインアークを防衛し、ORCA旅団と関係があったのだろうかと勝手に想像してしまったり

腐敗はあれど民主主義を掲げたラインアークや
国家解体戦争の様な出来事を知る才人と
世界が異なるとはいえ支配者層に属するアンリエッタ

この二人の見ていた世界の違いから来る関わり合いがどのようになっていくかとても楽しみです。

No.2   投稿者:流しの読者A   投稿日:2009-05-12 13:25   ID:p6rjYu/qS.M
余り見ないレアな設定に(アンリエッタメイン+アーマードコア)惹かれました(笑)中身も良い出来で次回が楽しみです。
後、気になったんですが…
Princesses'→Princess'es
…ただ、この用法にもの凄い違和感を感じるんですが、自分の(底辺に近い)語学力では断言出来ないのが悲しいです。
実際の所、どうなんでしょうか?

No.1   投稿者:ハマシオン   投稿日:2009-05-12 00:55   ID:uk4AsIEYhoo
これはACファンの一人として反応せざるを得ない。

冒頭のシーンはOPムービーを意識したものでしょうか。アンリエッタの視点ということで、無闇にACサイドの単語を使っていないのは中々にGoodですね。
ホワイトグリントの搭乗者がサイトというのはいいとして、召喚したのがアンリエッタ……?
だとするとルイズは一体誰を召喚するのか、そこも注目ですね。
それはそれとして、召喚時に光の翼を出していたという事は、OBを展開していたという事だから、辺りはコジマ粒子で汚染されていると……アンアン他多数の先生生徒諸君の体は大丈夫なのかw

ACとゼロ魔という設定も世界観も180度違う作品同士のクロス。
正直、お話の展開がかなり難しくなることと思いますが、続きを楽しみに待っております。

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